tony2 wrote:Actually, I was just baiting you to keep the story going.
It was worth a try anyway
sarwrductan wrote: I'm curious...Didn't the sheriff or police get curious about the gates being open ...I mean, it being a break in what's normal wouldn't someone have noticed and called it in if not check it out?
sarwrductan wrote:Hmmm ...What time the donut shops close huunnh?...Smiles...As far as the analogy...fascinating. While reading these latest comments my mind referred back to one story.."David's First Tug"...Then to..Prisoner in the back yard...[uhh that's where angel boy and devil boy were...Correct?] But all of these together and looking into details for actions and reactions...plus the writer's anticipated,assumed, or interpreted; character acts or reactions, to stimulus behaviors; I find it all so extraordinarily challenging.....Gasp! Wheeze!
tony2 wrote:they pulled that off DA before the author could finish it --- never did find out. Looking forward to your re posting it here when you can.
tony2 wrote:even old, it reads like new
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